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Literature Text
When I go flying
At night asleep
I visit different places
With people to meet
When I go flying
I’m not alone
I am with and without
Every one I’ve know
When I go flying
I take with me
A friend, a lover
A fantasy
When I go flying
The world I roam
To be explored
But never to own
When I go flying
I see and know
What wise men search for
And heroes show
When I go flying
Up in the breeze
I find hope
And with that peace
When I go flying
Everything’s right
No war, No hatred
No fear of the night
When I go flying
I don’t want to land
But morning comes
I again join the world of man
At night asleep
I visit different places
With people to meet
When I go flying
I’m not alone
I am with and without
Every one I’ve know
When I go flying
I take with me
A friend, a lover
A fantasy
When I go flying
The world I roam
To be explored
But never to own
When I go flying
I see and know
What wise men search for
And heroes show
When I go flying
Up in the breeze
I find hope
And with that peace
When I go flying
Everything’s right
No war, No hatred
No fear of the night
When I go flying
I don’t want to land
But morning comes
I again join the world of man
I hope you like it © 2005 - 2024 sin-jin
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The biggest thing I would suggest to you would be to reread this in order to find a way to restructure it in order to improve the meter. Also, I would come up with various synonyms for flying so that you're not repeating the same phrase over and over again. The repetition can become tedious if there is no change in words, if not idea : )